Heartless, Page 1

Okay, this was a test to see what my Comic skills are XD I rate them a 5/10 ^^ I did this quick, but AHHH I almost cried making it DX

Kirara is being a little harsh on Thorn, but... Why would Thorn betray her by being with another mare?! They are mates after all, together forever....

As you may have guessed, yes, they are both VERY young here. Only 4 ^^ Kirara has no ear piercings yet. Oh and I hope you don't mind ~Twilight-Mustang, but I changed her face marking ^^

Thorn, if you recognised him XD Hasn't even found his father yet, Taboo. He doesn't even know he carnivorous! He has no scars and he hasn't choped off his mane yet . Also, his right ear piercing hasn't been torn out yet either.

This is before Albia dies. Right now her and Demyx are off living happily together, while Thorn travels the land. He finds a mate of his own, Kirara XD But it doesn't last long, when Kirara find him cheating on her. But, although it sounds wrong of me to say, don't blame it all on Thorn. He has his reasons, and you will find them out soon enough.

So he and Kirara split up, Albia falls off the cliff, Demyx and Thorn meet back up and find the others [Bracken and Danny]. Then, unfortunatly, they find Kirara. Kirara has changed, and her and Thorn both moved on from their days as a couple. Infact they now loath eachother Yes, my characters are very complicated ^^ Oh and ofcourse they find Vinnie last XD

So, if I make a comic this is a taste of what it will be like. Oh and btw, that is the Glen behind them.

Keep an eye out for page 2!!!!

ALL characters are Art owned by =Dakareegurl